Once i was just walking down the street and suddenly hit by a car become unconscious i don't know where was i ?
suddenly the place filed with a darkness and a figure in black (cant been able to see its color) appeared blared, my heart engulfed with a unknown fear, suddenly a bright ball start appearing approaching the place and slowly slowly the darkness reduces and now the atmosphere is something like contrast of bright darkness.noyw one more figure is visible on opposite side of first that is in drizzling dress with brightness.
i was completely in a fuss where am i?
suddenly the unknown fear of my heart change into extreme curiosity and after that ...................
i asked who r u? and where am i?
the black one replied i am your destiny the Death, suddenly the bright one shouted no i am your destiny to survive to enjoy the ultimate gift that is life.
No don't listen him because of being in this world he has inherited some quality of earthly politician life has never been the ultimate gift but only i have been the ultimate destination to be relax after all your struggling grief humiliation insults of so called ultimate gift life.
Life then replied no, that's not the fact, no one wants to come to you i am more popular than you that why u are feeling jealous.
No you only give suffering to people nothing as replied The black one.
then tell me why every one wants me and have the fear of you if i use to make them suffer.
Every bad thing is attractive in nature and every one who scarifies themselves for others be unpopular .
If you only make them suffer than also they might be uncomplaining but at the same time you give someone more than require and give rise to comparability and raise there sufferings.
the drizzling figure replied no i always give same joy to people but their own desires put them in suffering, they don't know how to be happy but still they don't want to go to you?
the black figure laughed slowly, ya that's true but when your game of low high which you enjoy must becomes difficult to handle and they lost with all hopes they came to me for ultimate relief that time there fear changes into sign of relief and peace of salvation. in my world no one is discriminate every one get only one thing relief from all sufferings of life.
So when they relies your truth that you are simply playing with their souls like a politician showing them dream of joy but snatching their peace they opt for change and for ultimate joy of peace and salvation.
NO shouted the drizzle figure sufferings are there in your world people become ghosts and that haven and hell that's exists there also?
ha ha ha i like your debating skill life i really like ... you are talking about the thing which only your .0000005% believes in that's also then when you fill them with all route of nonsuccessive or you operate them to do something unethical that thing is not there in my world.
just tell me one thing is there any evidence of life after death no because there is no suffering only sound of suffering leaks , now you will say no sound of joy also leaks because i know you are a very good debater.
so let me tell you in your world they is joy on cost of someones suffering that's why that joy leaks but in my world there is no suffering that's why nothing leaks.
so you must believe that i am a better companion and you are only a journey who gives different experiences but i am the ultimate destination and destination ALWAYS GIVE JOY AND MORE JOY JUST ACHIEVE A SMALL ONE TO FEEL IT.............................
now life smiles and says i know that and with time you are improving in debating skill now i know why more people has start coming closer to you and why the young ones are loosing your fear
well are you taking him right now,
no replied black ne he still have desire to live and i don't want to force him let him come to me .................................
then my eyes open up suddenly and i found so many people around and some one is fetching water on my face....
But this incident just changed my attitude towards life and i start thinking.........
DID you???
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ReplyDelete1st of all vikas....
ReplyDeletea good post as u hav tried to tell the truth....
i also blieve that our lyf is journey to the ultimate destination i.e. DEATH....
vikas i hav 1 suggestion for u...
plz plz plz....
improve ur english
u know i have never commented in such a way for any of ur poem......
bt let me tell u these r not poems.....
so u hav to be very careful with ur gramatical mistakes on the post like these....
i hope u will nt take me wrong
And in ur next Post i will see few mistakes....
i know that i'm nt as good in english as u r bt still its really really......pathetic to see so many mistakes......
n do delete this comment after reading........
however the idea is really good.......
sorry for such harsh comment....
ur well wisher SRIJAN
u have inspired me to write a post a bit similar this.....
ReplyDeletelets see what if i able to write that..or not....
first of let me congratulate u for inspiring someone to write a similar post...
ReplyDeleteBut, but, but.. let me make it very cear that i am disappointed this time... I really liked ur idea about having conversation between life and death... but the way u have written the post, i am sorry to say, is actually pathetic...
And it is quite surprising also that, u haven't given any emphasis on grammar or formatting the post (where are the puntuations mate?)... It seems u have given only importance to whatever came to ur mind, without really caring about what u r writing about is right or wrong...
and i couldn't even get why u have written a few lines in red and blue color...
its a shame i couldn't enjoy what u wanted to say.. lot of potential in the topic though..
i will personally advice u to write in hindi (Blogger provides facility to blog in hindi)... u have much better command in that language...
ReplyDeleteAnd where are those poems mate.. i demand that some of ur latest poems be published in this space... u can't keep ur fans out of that joy.. now can u?
Although I had seen this post more than an year ago, but I skipped reading it, even superficially. Predictably, because it includes the dreaded word 'Death'.
ReplyDeleteHowever, now after having a closer tryst with this phenomenon, I feel you are absolutely right. Life is the cause of most of our sorrows, struggles and tribulations, by and large, while Death is the only escape from the gross pain.
Yet, I would like to know, whether it was purely an imagination, or you actually had a nightmare of this sort?
Either ways, the post is good, and idea has a potential. Just sometimes I felt, it was running in a hush, may be I am wrong...
As all those who commented above said, the topic you chose is interesting; the way you put up the conversation between two entities i.e Life and Death, seems like a movie going on, where an Angel and a Demon are portrayed arguing with each other (who plays who, is an individual interpretation), this is again a Plus!
Considering this is an old post, no comments on errors/mistakes, as in the succeeding years you have come a long way in terms of both the content and format of your writings.
Hopes are high that you update the Blog rather frequently, and let us see/read even brighter shades of it :)